Here is a short story I wrote. It belongs to a world I created for a novel I won't be writing until after my vampire trilogy and very likely some others as well. I wrote it for a contest, but it turned out too long for the word-limit, so I just posted it here.
Enjoy, and please do tell me what you think (I don't think you can leave comments on pages, so leave it here instead).
I'm all for a good monster fight, and the fight itself had a good amount of detail. The pacing was good and I could definitely tell what was going on.
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DeleteWhat did you think of the ending? I tried it out on my brother and the impression he got was not what I'd tried to put across.
This is sooooo awesome! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this line: "If I kill a basilisk, it had bloody well better have feathers." And then how you wrapped that into the ending--brilliant! VERY nicely done. Would you mind if I send this to the judges? I'm the one funding the contest and I think this is the perfect word count! ;) Sometimes you can't cut a story short and this is one of those times. :) People make exceptions for good writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteThat was one of my favourite parts too.
And I would be delighted if you sent it to the judges. There was a fee for entering the writing contest, wasn't there?
I paid the fee (because it was my idea and I believe in you ) and entered it. They're doing a lot of the judging this week ;)
ReplyDeleteThat's kind of you. :)
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